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bloggersjoy Level 1

January 11, 2016, 3:37 am

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Hello Everyone,

I made a short movie video today showing a person moving in the forest. Here is the link to the video and please give your reviews.

Thanks for watching.

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auffarahmawati

auffarahmawati

hello skipper.

intro too long in my opinion it's very boring, I Kalao make enough intro with 5 to 10 seconds it can be spoken.

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9 years ago

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hotcontent

hotcontent

its good but not best you have to improve in your video

9 years ago

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Heatman6190

Heatman6190

Well I have watched it and I'm definitely going to encourage you even though you still need to improve in your production. You have a good knack to produce much better ones.

The beginnings are the hardest part in any human programs and project but once you do it over and over again, you tend to get better. From what I observed in the clip, the man's foot appeared not to be touching the ground, so I recommend that you work on that as it would make it appear more real and his face hardly showed only his back, so also try and improve on that. Good luck in all your endeavors.

7 years ago

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pandooh

pandooh

I thought it was clickbait because of the long intro. Nevertheless, the main video is a good start. Just be more expressive in your story and have all the actions smoother like a man walking naturally. Overall, it's good! Keep it up.

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tophew

tophew

Base on my observation The concept is great just try to improve your graphics design and also the camera movements to be more interesting and great angles. but over all you have the potential to be a great video maker or editor just practice more train harder.

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Pixie06

Pixie06

I didn't really like the way those text were spinning. You could have used another effect. It took a long time before we finally get to see the man. You must also play on the colors a bit. I wish that the video about the man was longer. Maybe you can show us a short story the next time.

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gelotologist

gelotologist

I agree with them, that the intro must have been lowered or on less time only. Like you must focus on the story more because that is the reason why people would love to watch your show or movie and not because of your long intro. But all in all it's awesome.

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jaymish

jaymish

Great effort. I would never attempt to make such a video but well done!Animation is all the rage right now. I like how the man is walking thou, he looks like he is floating on water. A few tips I would give, is for you to make the video more entertaining. For example make the man jump on top of the hills and fall a couple of times. Make the video funny and the sky is the limit for you. I would also change his outfit to combat gear. Well done and good luck!

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